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Because It Makes Me Laugh

11/20/2014

 
Currently I am re-reading something I wrote in 2009. It was for Nanowrimo so it was written in a flurry and I hardly remember anything about it. BUT I think it has potential so I am taking another look at it. It's weird reading something you wrote so long ago. It feels like I'm reading another person's work, that's how weird it is.

Anyways's this small insert made me laugh. It's three best friends, two females, one male, just out of high school. There is an Easter Egg hidden in it too.
“You really think you’re gonna meet your true love that way, huh?” Bobby pulled on a hand full of grass.”

“Maybe,” Rebecca shrugged her shoulders again.

“Jealous,” Amanda threw a clod of dirt at him.

Bobby sat up again. “I don’t need to take this kind of abuse from you guys. I got all kinds of people waiting to abuse me.”

“Oh calm down,” Amanda grabbed his sleeve. “We do it out of love, those other people do it for sport.”

Bobby huffed and collapsed into the grass again.


Once I'm done reading through it I will be posting it on my Venture Forth website and Wattpad. If you're interested, I would love some feedback, I'm not really sure what to do with it.
Cindy
4/5/2015 06:02:21 am

I think it's a great start. Can't wait to see where it leads to!

Cindy
4/5/2015 06:03:42 am

Hi! I've been meaning to ask you, what's your Wattpad user name?


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